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posted on August 28, 2006 at 03:24 PM |
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August 28, 2006 - Fire Wyvern, Take 2
Well, I got some feedback on the Wyvern, and made some changes.

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posted on August 29, 2006 at 03:55 PM |
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Greetings. On the sketch. It's getting better. One, I would make the tail end in fire, no small ball then flames. Second I like the fins on the neck
but think they need to look a little more like flames. I like the shape of the wing but, if the skin making them up could look like fire/flames as
well all would be a go. The head, body, tail, leg and wing all look way cool!
Oh and I saw you had it litely roughed in on your first take but didn't see it in this one was, its other back leg. I have always wished I had the
talent of a good artist like yourself! Thanks for your interest and help in our device.
YIS,
Horn
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Mitz
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posted on August 30, 2006 at 05:18 PM |
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Hmmm, I think we may be getting to some cross purposes here.
As was explained to me, and this came from DJ through my husband, so there may be translation errors, what I was asked to do was create a design that
would, to my understanding, be going on fighter's tunics/tabards.
Now, to me, that would be done one of three ways: embroidery (not so good for active fighters), applique, or paint. Given this, I determined that the
design needed to be three things: Period, heraldic (or at least enough to keep the heralds happy), and simple (sp as to need less repair
between events).
I could easily add all those extra details you mentioned, but whomever you have put those on the tabards would probably come after me with ill
intent... For the same reason, I kept the profile simple. There is no
second leg... nor is there a second wing. (What you saw in the first sketch was the erased remnants of earlier sketching, when I discovered my
proportions were off.)
As I mentioned in my e-mails, I'd be willing to get together with you and DJ in person, possibly briefly at 3 Stags, to make sure we're all clear on
everything. In the end, as my client, DJ will have the final say.
Regards,
Mitz
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